Digi awards

In Rimu class we all have been doing our digi awards. For my Digi award I and my friends made our own

video. Our video was about making more smoke free zones

and encouraging  people to stop smoking.

What I thought that was challenging was trying to get perfect angles, we could not find a very good angle so we moved the camera as we went.

How to write a Quality Blog Comment

Hello guys, I had to write a Quality blog comment Enjoy!

Why America should upgrade their security

In the last six weeks Rimu was working on how to write and create persuasive speeches, There was no specific topic to write about so I chose to write about Why the U.S.A should upgrade their security. I see a lot of CNN so I think a lot about the USA and the bad things that are happening.
I hope you like it!

Here is my speech, for why United States Of America should upgrade their Security.
What I did really well is speak clearly. What I should work on is looking at the audience and not looking at the cards. Here are the three things I was trying to work on:

Speaking at an appropriate pace.

Getting the Audience hooked in.

Eye contact with the Audience.

How do you think I went?