In the last six weeks Rimu was working on how to write and create persuasive speeches, There was no specific topic to write about so I chose to write about Why the U.S.A should upgrade their security. I see a lot of CNN so I think a lot about the USA and the bad things that are happening.
I hope you like it!
Here is my speech, for why United States Of America should upgrade their Security.
What I did really well is speak clearly. What I should work on is looking at the audience and not looking at the cards. Here are the three things I was trying to work on:
Speaking at an appropriate pace.
Getting the Audience hooked in.
Eye contact with the Audience.
How do you think I went?
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