Here is my 100 Word Challenge. This is a writing competition we enter each week and get feedback from teachers and students from all over the world. I was trying to include a metaphor - can you find it? Rimu
students have been doing the 100 Word Challenge this week we are looking forward for it next week.
I was walking home from school, My friend Isaac left home the other way near the town hall. On the way home the sun shined really bright, I was blinded by the light of the sun. I ran home as fast as I can, as the sun shines brighter then a star.
I scattered home for shelter away from the sun, Then Suddenly a large BOOM! striked my house. My mom was screaming with fear so as my sister, but then the light blew out all of the thunder in one shot. That when i saw a stairway to heaven.
I love the 100 word challenge. You will be to young to know that you have many song titles or ideas included in your writing. You may want to rethink your 'sun shining brighter than a star' - you'll get what I mean. I look forward to your next blog post.
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