Week 4, Rimu class had a funny week last week. Most people didn't get to the 100wc. But this week
Rimu class have all been doing there 100wc. Please give me feedback of useful comments that could
help. Thank you.The Prompt is …as the flame flickered and then went out…
One day I was getting out of bed.. Nobody noticed the Thunder that was going on, I was the only one. I stood up ate some cereal made my Lunch and Left like everybody else. It was 8:00am the bus arrived I ran to the bus and met my friends, Zac, Isaac and Base we talked about sport. 9:00am school started i’m at my desk awaiting what my teacher wanted to do. 11:00am break time I saw a magican who was playing with fire…as the flame flickered and then went out…
Boom!
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