Joe's Rain Stopped Play - Weka Reading Activities

Here are my reading activities in the last couple of weeks. We are learning to make meaning of text. Enjoy!

My Second 100wc

Week 4, Rimu class had a funny week last week. Most people didn't get to the 100wc. But this week 
Rimu class have all been doing there 100wc. Please give me feedback of useful comments that could 
help. Thank you.The Prompt is …as the flame flickered and then went out…

One day I was getting out of bed.. Nobody noticed the Thunder that was going on, I was the only one. I stood up ate some cereal made my Lunch and Left like everybody else. It was 8:00am the bus arrived I ran to the bus and met my friends, Zac, Isaac and Base we talked about sport. 9:00am school started i’m at my desk awaiting what my teacher wanted to do. 11:00am break time I saw a magican who was playing with fire…as the flame flickered and then went out…
Boom!

100wc Stairway to heaven

Here is my 100 Word Challenge. This is a writing competition we enter each week and get feedback from teachers and students from all over the world. I was trying to include a metaphor - can you find it? Rimu 

students have been doing the 100 Word Challenge this week we are looking forward for it next week.

I was walking home from school, My friend Isaac left home the other way near the town hall. On the way home the sun shined really bright, I was blinded by the light of the sun. I ran home as fast as I can, as the sun shines brighter then a star.

I scattered home for shelter away from the sun, Then Suddenly a large BOOM! striked my house. My mom was screaming with fear so as my sister, but then the light blew out all of the thunder in one shot. That when i saw a stairway to heaven.

My Timetable Term 2 2016

This Term Rimu class, have been working on a timetable to self manage our learning. This is important because in the future we will be doing this more and more. Some of my work this week was difficult - I got help from my friends. What do you think? Any tips for me?

True or False?

My Grandpa was in the German Nazi 107th Division, My Grandpa’s Dad was a German Genrel named Schmidt. He was in The winter War he was at the frontlines in the trenches. He looked up and saw the Russian and reported it to head of this operations. He

defended the frontlines with other Germans. The Russian were about to launch a Charge.

“The Russians Are Attacking!” one german said, Then The Germans Charged at the same time and both sides where killed by Attlirey. My grandpa was A Surivor and helped a german with no leg screaming in Pain, My granpa requested a medic. My granpa was promted to Litunent Colonel, and earned 12 medals.

After The war

 

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