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Friday, June 3, 2016

3rd 100wc

One day I was looking at the Bronze  man who looked like he was made of Bronze.
I said “Hey, How are you”? He Had a hat like a cowboy, He wore a leather jacket,
A brown pale shoes and had a beard, Is it a Man?

He was still, still? So I Grab my book out and put on my awesome glasses.
I check my watch it is 3:00pm he is still there I continue reading. I move my suitcase back so It does not get in the way of the people. That’s when I noticed

It was a..

1 comment:

  1. Hi Joe
    I like how you put some seeing and telling words two.
    I think you need to work on is were are you and tell some more things about you.

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